Yeelp's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Space Donut]

The melody is nice. I like the whole feel the song has. Although the melody wasn't changing, it was nice. I really like the song and I can see how far you've come in comparison to Future. I don't think there's as many flaws as you think! :) Keep chuggin' away at it and you'll be a great dubstep artist.

Pandasticality responds:

thank you for your kind words! this is a old song, a little over a year ago if im not mistaken, its not my best work but i decided to upload it here cuz i liked how the melody turned out even though its repeative :x thank you for your review, really helps!
- Pandasticality

[Future]

When I went to review this, I got interrupted twice and had to wait before being able to review it again. However, I had listened all the way up to the drop and I must say, I was laughing but not in the "making fun" way but in the baffled way. I was anxiously waiting to hear the rest of the song and you did not disappoint. I was just so dazzled about how masterfully the piece was put together. The short stabs at the beginning seemed cut-off, but that didn't detract from the song in my opinion. Honestly, the song just completely blew me away. The melody, although it didn't change much, still remained so interesting and entertaining that I HAD to listen to the song again and again. I'm downloading this song and adding it to my music library. Amazing work, I'm speechless. Bravo! :)

Pandasticality responds:

wow, so kind ;__; u gunna make me cry, thank you sir, sincerely, glad you liked it so much n__n!
- Pandasticality

[Forgotten Portal]

For a Portal 2 mod, it definitely captures the feel of isolation that surrounds the Portal franchise. However, there's more. There's also that unsettling feeling that's carried throughout the piece. Sounds great really, although there might be too much going on for it to be a soundtrack. It all depends if this will play during a cut scene or as background music. If it's for a cut scene, it's fantastic in my opinion. Everything works well together. All in all, it's great. I hope your mod has much success!

Rich209 responds:

Thanks for the nice comments! Yes this piece will be for a cut scene, or rather a interactive cut scene. Most of the music in this mod takes place at scripted events.

[Ember's Rest]

Wow, I don't know what to say.

Honestly. I was extremely bored 4 minutes and nine seconds ago. Not anymore. Wow is all I can say. It's a really nice piece. Really gets you in the feels XD. But seriously now, it got me thinking of a whole bunch of real world issues. The piano is pretty fluent, the strings not too overpowering and the only thing I would suggest is that the melody doesn't move too much for a song that's 4:09; which prevents the listener from moving from one thought (or "real world issue")to another. The song clearly portrays either a story or message but had the melody moved more, it would've been stellar. But that doesn't even bother me. I voted 5 and that's probably the first time I've done that. Great job!

drumdude responds:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it, and it got you thinking.

I see what you're saying about moving the melody. Honestly, I thought about it many times while writing this, but opted against it as I have an unfortunate habit of adding TOO much and I really wanted to keep the song more mellow and calming rather than moving things too far and messing up my original idea.

I am honored to receive your first 5 vote haha. Thanks for the review

[Dependent]

Hmm... Very interesting.

I'm not gonna touch base on the religious aspect just to keep things simple. As for the lyrics, it's up to you really. Make two copies, one with the whisper and the other with normal singing and compare for yourself. Remember, you're audio reflects your opinion so if you think it needs to be whispered, then whisper the lyrics! In my opinion, I think normal singing would work better however. But the simple lyrics really work with the simple melody

Now to the music itself! Sounds solid really - nice work! The only thing I would suggest is to add some more melody next time. The instruments remain simple and true to the song. The whole thing sounds very cleansing. Awesome job!

SoulSecure responds:

Lol @ "next time" I write music all the time :P

I think I'm going to do the vocals the way I did them on The Common Bedroom. What I think I need to do is put in more verses of lyrics to keep it cohesive.

Thanks for the review!